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Written assessments

Assessment 1: how does Proctor change?

Prompt (120 words): Describe Proctor at the beginning and at the end of the play.

Sentence starters
  • At the beginning, Proctor...
  • Then, in court, he...
  • At the end, he...
  • He changes because...
CriteriaLevel 1Level 2Level 3Level 4
Answer to the promptOff topicPartialClearClear and nuanced
Evidence from the playNoneGeneralPrecise examplesPrecise examples and a quotation
OrganisationNo planBasicParagraphs and connectorsFluent and logical
LanguageMany errorsSome errorsFew errorsAccurate and varied
Model answer

At the beginning, Proctor is a farmer with a secret: he had an affair with Abigail. He does not want to speak. Then, in court, he tells the truth to save his wife. At the end, he refuses to sign a lie. He prefers to die with his name. He changes because he wants to be honest.

Assessment 2: why did Miller write the play?

Prompt (120 words): Why did Miller write about Salem in the 1950s? Choose one theme: fear or rumours.

Sentence starters
  • Miller wrote the play in...
  • In Salem, people...
  • In the 1950s, people...
  • Miller wanted to show that...
CriteriaLevel 1Level 2Level 3Level 4
Answer to the promptOff topicPartialClearClear and nuanced
Evidence from the playNoneGeneralPrecise examplesPrecise examples and a quotation
OrganisationNo planBasicParagraphs and connectorsFluent and logical
LanguageMany errorsSome errorsFew errorsAccurate and varied
Model answer

Miller wrote the play in 1953. In Salem, people were afraid of witches. In the 1950s, Americans were afraid of communists. In both cases, people accused others without proof. Miller wanted to show that fear is dangerous. Today, rumours online can be dangerous too.

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